Link of the original post: https://agenzblog.opened.ca/2021/03/20/twine-story/ 

I really like the way you explained how your story follow the Segmenting Principle. During the reading process, I had realized a multiple choice question appeared twice in the story, it appeared once at the beginning and the end of the story, this actually helped me understand the story more fully. I also agree that doing so will develop learners’ creativity. Then, I like the definition of Twine story you gave at the end of your analysis. It may be necessary in the future to extend such a convenient and practical multimedia learning to every subject in school. Finally, I wonder if you can write the story a little longer? This may make the story richer and be more attractive to learners.

Overall, I really like the story you created and agree with your analysis of the story.