Link of the original post: https://tinawang.opened.ca/2021/03/06/topic-7-importance-of-storytelling/ 

I liked the story you created with the software called Twine. You have added pictures related to it during the storytelling process, this makes learners feel as if they are in the scenes of the story (Victoria), and then their learning effect will be naturally improved. This also fits the Multimedia Principle. Then, I like the way you explained how your storytelling fits the Signaling Principle. In the process of reading the story, I did notice the highlighted parts, and they really helped me understand the content of the story better. Finally, I wonder if you can add more choices to lead the story in different directions? This may further improve the integrity of the story.

Overall, I enjoyed the story you created and your analysis of it.